Belgarath | Date: Tuesday, 2015/April/21, 7:54 AM | Message # 1 |
Sunday, January 11th, 2015
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| After MANY years of confeds page, there is a error on the legends page, clearly no one reads through this, so ill just post this here and see if anyone can find it
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Tyrael | Date: Tuesday, 2015/April/21, 8:13 AM | Message # 2 |
Tuesday, 5th May, 2015.
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| Paragraph 1, Line 3 accerlate should be accelerate.
Paragraph 2, line 1 hard-care should be hard-core*
Paragraph 2, line 5 preform should be perform
Legend SyXx "SyXx was the perfect member role model of ANY member" I believe should be "SyXx was the perfect role model of ANY member"
* Identified by Flamer.
EDIT: Did a quick check of the other pages and identified the below:
Academy Part 2 laws Article 3 - Respect line 2 "in-clan and outside of Clan has a" should be "in-clan and outsid of the lan has a"
Part 3 History Paragraph 3, line 3 "we have went through" should be , "we have gone through"
Part 3 history Paragraph 6, line 2 apart should be a part
Part 3 history Paragraph 8, line 2 apart should be a part
Part 6 ranks Paragraph 3, line 3 "There are variety of requirements to rank up" should be "There are avariety of requirements to rank up"
--------- High Command rank page
CDA section Unform should be Uniform
--------- Keepers rank page Paragraph 1, line 4 it's should be its
Premier promotion paragraph line 5 fullfill should be fulfil
Gurdian duties paragraph, line 5 it's should be its
Elite Enforcer duties paragraph, line 1 hitlist should be hit list
Elite Enforcer duties paragraph, line 2 it's should be its
---------- CRA rank page
CRA rank descriptions paragraph, 2 line 2 it's should be its
Commandant duties paragraph, line 2
--------- SSA rank page
SSA rank descriptions paragraph, line 1 it self should be itself
SSA rank descriptions paragraph, line 8 abence should be absence
SSA Coordinator duties paragraph, line 2 it's should be its
SSA Coordinator promotion paragraph, line 4
preform should be perform
A-6 rank descriptions paragraph line 2 it's should be its
---------- Diplomacy
Section 3 paragraph, line 1
is is should be is
---------- Awards
Medal of Shame paragraph, line 3 luck laster should be lucklastre
Medal of honor A) paragraph, line 2 "in a ethical and diligent" should "in an ethical and diligent"
Medal of Honor paragraph 1, line 2 what ever should be whatever
sucess should be success
Message edited by Tyrael - Tuesday, 2015/April/21, 9:10 AM |
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